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August 2, 2012
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At the rise of a new dawn
Rose the children of the sun
To inhabit a kingdom
Augustly crowned in rock mass vast

All lakes are sanctuaries
Like covert nemetons
All forests are hallowed
Blest groves of an invictus tribe

Nertom woloutom que (We are strong and we are rich)
Etsi snis karamos-e (And we gladly are)

Nertom woloutom que etsi snis (We are strong and we are rich)
Emmos snis riyi emmos snis (We are free, that's what we are)

Widomor-e Karamos-e (We know it and we love to know it)
Emmos snis riyi emmos snis andometi (We are free and we are untamed)
Nertom woloutom que etsi snis (We are strong and we are rich)
Emmos snis riyi emmos snis (We are free, that's what we are)

A kingliy tribe sublime
Arose in it's golden time
In a prosperous era
The age primordial reign

A horde of untameables
Invincible armada
A dashing bold host
Of venturous fear naughts !!

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Paint tool SAI
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:iconhawaiianbacon:
This is my first critique, so I hope it is as fair as possible. :)

Vision:
The art is titled "Crystal Soldier" which clearly portrays the soldiers inner justice and purity.
The look on the face of the soldier is a look of despair, which leaves the viewer to suggest the reason for despair. (Perhaps the battle is lost?)

Originality:
Obviously, MLP is not original, but I haven't seen many armoured ponies, other than Luna's guards.
Your colour and style is original however, and gives a unique look to your artwork.

Technique:
The rushed undeveloped lines on the helmet show that the art was produced in a short 2 hours. However you paid attention to the lighting and the vibrant colours used in the art, which all comply to your art style perfectly.
Personally, I found it hard to pinpoint where the light source was coming from. But I assume it was coming from the bottom left due to the direction of the light coming off the characters eye.

Impact:
Overall, the art makes the viewer imagine what the pony is fighting for, and the reason for its facial expression.
The art technique was specific to your style of drawing.
I love it!
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=Rajdziu Nov 21, 2012  Student Photographer
to bad is not more wide I coudl use it on my descktop
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:iconrainbowmax:
Franchement imalou ! C'est tout simplement magnifique ! je suis encore un peu loin de toi ^^
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Mood: Noble ~Modus-Indorum Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Prepare the ponies of war!
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:iconweirdponyguy:
She looks so confident in her skill, like if she was prepared to kill a thousand soldiers.
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*EagleSpartan888 Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautiful work! I love how it turned out! Great job!!!!
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=8loodyrain Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconanthrooptimist:
Picture's great but I cant understand a single freakin word they say XD
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~Jelenadbz Aug 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Cool.
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:iconlord-skorg:
ELUVEITIE YAY :dummy:
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